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Between us(plz Comment)
written by dark_child0710:52 PM 1/31/05The distance between us,
is tearing me apart,
the miles between us,
breaks my heart.
You are my best friends,
this is true,
There are 3 hrs. between us,
but yet, I am still with you.
You are still there to give me advise,
You are still ther to comfort me,
And best of all, aven though,
there is so much between us, You still love me.
(As a best friend of course....This is for you guys:Terry, Danielle, Travis, and Cory...I Love you guys...I will see you sooner than ya think!!!!!) |
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» Comments / Feedback | by boom_boom13 (1-31-2005 - 10:56 PM)
ha, it's a nice poem to think of. good job. |
by MaterLuna-26 (2-1-2005 - 01:12 AM)
very nice lilcorky and what is that ending suppose to mean
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by trina (2-9-2005 - 07:25 PM)
that was a good one to so what who r those guyz something bad happened never mind |
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