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» Poem: When Someone Saves You
When Someone Saves You
written by Broken Phoenix
12:20 AM 2/2/05
Can you save my soul
Can you let me go
Can you just say ok
Cause I may be aching
The ground may be shacking
And hearts may be breacking
But you just got to let it go sometimes
I don't if not all this rymes
But I've been trough this a hundered times
And sometimes it dosent make sense
When everythings a mess
But its just test
I know you wish it were a lil less
But hey what can you do
When someones saves you
And all the stuff youve been trough
Melts away
And I know you may not let go
But atleast I know
There always someone there for me
Look deep into these eyes what do you see
When you look deep inside of me
I know there's so much too see
And I wonder if this could be
Everthing I've been looking for
And it's turned into so much more


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» Comments / Feedback
by boom_boom13 (2-2-2005 - 12:26 AM)
really good poem.

by boom_boom13 (2-2-2005 - 12:29 AM)
p.s- i don't know why, but i guess it cheered me up; i'l read this whenever i go down again... it made be realize i have someone there for me... thanx.

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