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I Lied (plz comment)
written by sk8rchik04:45 AM 2/2/05You have to believe me when i say
i love you with all my heart,
but with each and every passing day
we've been slowly drifting apart.
I just confessed a deep secret
that i've always kept from you
I never meant for it to hurt so bad
and you've never had a clue.
I'm not who you think i am,
now i must come clean
forget everything i've ever said
i am not sixteen.
I lied about my age
if i could i would've told
but i didnt think you could love
a thirteen year old.
My birthday is in 3 days
you said you had a gift
but after i revealed my secret
thats when we started to drift.
Once i told my secret
you told me what my gift was about
i couldn't believe what you had planned
you were gonna ask me out.
Now you're telling me
if i had told you from the start
you wouldn't have cared as much
and wouldn't have broke my heart.
Now you don't know who to believe
and i'm sure you have tried
there's nothing i can say
except i'm sorry that i lied. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i lied and i'm sry.....i still luv him but i hope he can forgive me
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XsouredXfaithX (2-2-2005 - 04:46 AM)
| just goes to show you lying never works out in the end if you want happiness |
by demonbaby09 (2-2-2005 - 04:58 AM)
| aw that's so sweet. very good especially for a 14 year old (i'm 14 too) happy early birthday! great job |
by SnakeCharm4 (2-3-2005 - 04:22 AM)
| It's very nice. I don't know how old your b/f was, but I have had a bad problem with age difference. I am thirteen at the moment, and I went out with a seventeen year old. I had to break up with him, because, sadly, parents made us break it.. I still miss him! :( |
by XxBloodySoulxX (2-3-2005 - 07:23 AM)
| Hey i thought it was a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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