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Letting You Leave
written by boom_boom13
06:46 AM 2/2/05
Deep into the night, I dream of you,
And my love towards you is really true,
But you love another, and I watch you kiss her everyday,
And it pains me to see that, so I always turn away.
I wish I could have you in my arms,
I wish I could protect you from any harm,
And I wish I could hold you within my heart,
But you wouldn't like it, so we'd have to stay apart.
But you don't know, you don't have a clue,
That everything I wish is a wish for you.
And when I see you laugh and have fun with her,
I look down and think that she is the luckiest girl in the world.
And I wish you were mine,
I wish you could be my special Valentine,
But you have another,
And my feelings I have to smother
Before they reach up like fire and get out of hand,
And spread across the love land.
But one day I realised that if I wanted you to be truly happy, and me too,
No matter how much I greived,
No matter how much I don't want to beleive,
I've got to learn to let you leave.
So here I go,
I'm letting you out,
And I can feel you be relieved.
But that makes me happy;
seeing you happy that I had to let you leave.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I kinda made it up along the way, but i think it's sad... share ur thots with comments please! lol,

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» Comments / Feedback
by mikilana (2-2-2005 - 06:48 AM)
Great work!

by lilfukedupdragonlover (2-2-2005 - 09:48 PM)
god damnit u made me cry. i realli like this poem.

by lilfukedupdragonlover (2-2-2005 - 09:52 PM)
god damnit u made me cry. i realli like this poem.

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