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My Suicide
written by another_broken_soul07:38 AM 2/2/05single tear
dark thoughts
the crash of glass
shattering before me
my heart
silent, still
falls into black
for you
gasps of pain
wounds on my wrist
one for each shard
of my illusion
you reach inside
pull at my soul
stealing my last retreat
the one place in me
that lies untouched
uncorrupted
can't look away
i won't stop
crimson pain leaves me
stars blurr
last breath won't stay...
doorknob clicks
cries of hurt
of horror
that hollow dialtone
flashing lights
beacons of lost innocence
lost hope
a trail of red follows me
as they carry me
away from my
suicide |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the stanzas are kinda weird-oh well. let me know what you think...is it really stupid for a 15 year old to try to write about killing themselves and expect to be taken seriously?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-7-2005 - 11:32 PM)
| i likeit a lot.. and i think that its awsome.. sorry but i aint good at writing these.. |
by (guest) (4-22-2005 - 06:15 PM)
| great poem sad though i know how u feel |
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