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Shotgun
written by EbonySeraph07:57 PM 2/2/05Like a shotgun blast to the
Back of the head you
Ran out and left me for dead
Though it was only my heart which
Stopped beating for a moment
And if I could I would
Leave my scattered remains
For you to clean up
Just like the ribbons of
This failed relationship
I hate everything about you
And I want you to die a little inside
When you look at me |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by elfish88 (2-2-2005 - 08:11 PM)
| Hey, that was really good. Use some punctuation if you can, it was a little hard to follow- NOT an insult heh, it was awesome and you can really write! |
by another_broken_soul (2-7-2005 - 06:01 AM)
| that was a flawless description of my last relationship. really nice writing. i love your style. keep it up. |
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