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Pure Poison
written by boom_boom1301:37 AM 2/3/05This is something that I'm addicted to,
And that something is you.
Your love is pure poison,
And I can't get away.
I love the taste of sweet venom,
Everytime you take me away.
This pure poison feels like it has something special,
Something to adore,
Because when I et close to you, I want it even more.
And this love of your feels like pure poison; i can't get it out of my head,
And it calls to me every night before I go to bed.
Let me have a taste of the sweet venom, something that I'm drawn,
Let me have one more kiss of your pure poison. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I think this turned out to be good... oh yeah, who could forget the orignal... COMMENTS PLEASE!!! lol, good or bad.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by elfish88 (2-3-2005 - 01:42 AM)
| Did you get inspiration from my poem "Sweet Lips Spit Venom?" It's very good, I like this one a lot. |
by jaggalosb*tch (2-3-2005 - 01:50 AM)
| i like that a lot its very pretty. good job! |
by Sk8ergirl30027 (2-3-2005 - 01:53 AM)
by noangel (2-3-2005 - 03:09 AM)
| i like it, but i have to wonder: if the love is supposed to be poison, what's bad about it? |
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