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» Poem: ~LIAR~
~LIAR~
written by seksiebeest
12:17 AM 2/4/05
When i'm all alone
I sit on my bed
and think about the things
that you once said
You said that I was one of a kind
that I was a different chick
now tell me this,
who the hell is that Claudia bitch?
our love was only lies
so Jose lie to me
and tell me how you and I
were forever meant to be
You "loved" me
before you even met her
you dumped me for that bitch
how the hell is she "better."
You never were worth it
worth all those tears
that were shed from these here eyes
for your so called fears
You're such a fucking liar
Lying is all you do
how do I know you really "loved me"
oh, now I'm supposed to trust you
I thought you loved me
I thought I loved you too
but now I realize the truth
now what the hell am I supposed to do?
I still love you
and I always will
unlike you, I tell the truth
that, you'll never do!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm not shallow!

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-4-2005 - 12:58 AM)
*Awesome Poem*....*It remind's ME....Of Me and my Ex Boyfriend.*....*Smile*

by (guest) (2-7-2005 - 08:04 AM)
How exactly is this an epic poem? "The Odyssey" and "The Iliad" are epic poems. This is free verse.

by Xx_devangel_xX (3-27-2005 - 01:46 AM)
I loved it!!! OMG it remind's me of me and my ex boyfriend when except he cheeted and then dumped me and i was so blind !! damnit!! you deserve and awarde!! -hand's you a trophie-

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