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the beauty of flames
written by DeaD_DyinG_PaiN10:39 PM 2/4/05The beauty hidden from thee.
Is just clearly hidden in my presences, in my pocket maybe?
Take a look and see..
The beauty that can warmth us,
Can also destroy us.
Freaking out, asking what I’m talking about?
But of coarse fire.
The beauty of fire is its freedom,
It can dance like a butterfly be where and what it wants to be.
Why cant we all be more like the beautiful dancing flames
That thee can never be? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Black_Butterfly (2-4-2005 - 10:43 PM)
| i think the end part of this poem is the best the middle is slightly weird its quite a good poem and i like the fact it rymes!good!xxx |
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