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My Sweet Valentine
written by anotefromacutter
02:17 AM 2/5/05
You were my sweet valentine,
up until that tragic day.
When you were gone,
I knew you had flown away.
But as I sat in front of the tellie,
I thought I had heard your name.
I thought my mind,
was just playing a sick game.
But I listened intentively,
and it said your body was found.
I didnt know what to do,
and wondered where you were bound.
I cried for days, I was pissed for weeks,
I even tried to go for suicide.

A year had passed, and I forgot your name.
I was with someone else.
It was Feb. 14th,
and there was no one else.
I was with her alone, when I heard you call,
I ran out the door, quick as one could.
Seeing you standing,
in the pouring down rain, what should i do?
I ran to your arms, and I left the other girl,
We went to the middle of nowhere,
we fell asleep, and I never woke up....


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
since valentines day is coming up, i thought id write something....for some reason.

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» Comments / Feedback
by stupidgirl629 (2-5-2005 - 04:33 AM)
I liked it b/c it was dark and it gave hope of a happy ending but then it crushed it into a billion smitherenes i like that in poems yeah 4 u

by all_yours (2-5-2005 - 04:55 PM)
perfect little poem -Marnie

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