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» Poem: taken today
taken today
written by deadly_tears
02:58 AM 7/9/04
My mind is saturated with opinion,
my heart is doused with pain,
my mind is blocking every word you speak,
my heart is trying not to sink,

my trust is a bomb waiting to explode,
my hope is a fairy tail that is getting really old,
my trust is being shaved away,
my hope was all taken today,

my soul is a slave waiting to be free,
my patence is a man diving into a black hole,
my soul is starting to shiver,
my patence is getting heavy and hard to pull,



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i would love it if you comented on my poem

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by kissingscars (7-13-2004 - 06:09 AM)
`well.....they are good and everything but you need to stop repeating yourself cuz when you read it it's just like the same thing over and over again....

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