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» Poem: torn into two
torn into two
written by deadly_tears
03:19 AM 7/9/04
I'm writting to you because there is no one else who cares. No one else here with me. So it is you i must write to.
I feel i am drowning but i am trying to stay above the water. As i sudenly push myself under. I realize even you, my mind has turned on me.
Even you want me to go. With no one who cares about me. What is the purpose of this pain that has torn me into two?
Wich one should i listen to? The one that wants me to go on or the one that wants me to end?
should i give it all up...


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please comment.. i would like to know what you think

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