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black
written by deadly_tears03:22 AM 7/9/04My cold, iced tears drizzle down my passionless face.
Rusting to my heart and soul,
they begin to crucify my mind.
I may not peer beyond my cold-blooded heart to see the light in the sky.
for in my world there is no gleam or flicker of light.
No music to help soothe my endless day of misery.
The raw taste of endless death and decay scares the last of my thoughts.
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» Comments / Feedback | by VampyrsDyingSong (7-9-2004 - 05:06 AM)
This is beautiful. So sociapathic, if you don't mind me saying, yet so full of that dark depression. Borderline, giving up, at the same time a flicker of wanting to go on. Thats what I get from it anyway. This was truly amazing. Have you ever considered joining Allpoetry.com? It's free and its a wonderful site!
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