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scars
written by lost_cause06:00 PM 2/5/05To take back every scar I've made
I wouldn't do a thing
No one understands
All the comfort they can bring
To see one and remember
Brings the saddest smile
Slowly watching as they multiply
In such a short while
Each scar has it's own story
One that will not be forgot
Some were my little secrets
Some of them got me caught
But what I wouldn't give
To write a story of my scars
So people can begin to know
What goes on in my heart |
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I don't know... I don't know... I wish I had something to write about... comments?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Marigold (2-5-2005 - 06:02 PM)
| Hey thats good. I write a bunch of stuff that I've been told is awesome. Go to my profile and read it please. And comment.
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by satanist_bitch (2-6-2005 - 03:35 AM)
| i like it.. it makes me think of myself.. and my scars.. |
by another_broken_soul (2-7-2005 - 05:59 AM)
| my scars bring a sad smile too...awsome piece. |
by forbiddenangelofdarkness (2-8-2005 - 08:42 PM)
| That is amazing YOU ARE REALLY GOOD READ MY POETRY AND COMMENT PLEASE |
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