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» Poem: They tell me...
They tell me...
written by lost_cause
07:29 PM 2/5/05
Does anyone get the pain that I feel?
They keep telling me the pain isn't real.
If it wasn't real would I have these scars?
They tell me my scars are what tore me apart.
If my scars tore me apart then why do I hate you?
They tell me they don't know and ask what did I do.
Do you understand that you make my life hell?
They say not as far as I can tell.
Do you have an idea of what you did?
They say no I don't, therefor you should live.
What if it's you that makes me want to die?
It couldn't be me, Never us, Not I.
So you're saying you've never hurt me, not one time?
They say I couldn't hurt you, it would be a crime.

I know that your lying, I know that you're fake.
So you telling me this was all a mistake.


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by another_broken_soul (2-7-2005 - 06:08 AM)
i don't know how you could not like this-it's really REALLY a poem that tons of people can relate to, including me. i love reding all your work, it's just all awsome. keep writing.

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