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» Poem: November 28th (COMMENT!)
November 28th (COMMENT!)
written by First2Last
05:34 AM 2/6/05
Laughed at; teased
never being pleased
quivered lips and shaken tears
would bring her to her knees

Razor cuts;
self inflicted pain
blood dripped between her fingers
she felt the shadows empty all her viens

heaving breaths
sighs between her shreiks
falling to the floor
because she was too weak

her eyes rolled
far inside her mind
so deep inside her thoughts,
there was no conscience you could find

fingers twitched
she went into shock
a smile drapped across her face
and her heart began to lock

suicide
resorted to this
laughing to herself
leaving the world with a quick kiss.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
just something i decided to write a long long time ago... this one ISNT about me. tell me what you think, if u read it, leave a note! damn it do it!

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by GeishaGirl (2-6-2005 - 07:38 AM)
very deep.

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