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» Poem: view through a crack
view through a crack
written by omegadrax
05:21 PM 2/6/05
early.
much too early.
i peek out.
the sun is there.
i can't see it,
but i know it is.
the blue sky
looks so nice.
clouds going by.
i only see one at a time.
the stores are opening.
i can't see them,
but i know the are.
cars speed by.
fast.
much too fast.
i close the shade.
you, my love,
are out there.
i can't see you,
but i know you are.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
as much as a man could love a city, i loved ann arbor. it breaks my heart to think about it even now.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-6-2005 - 05:43 PM)
SUCKS!

by Scorpionrose (2-11-2005 - 07:01 PM)
Guest ^ can kiss my ass. That was a good poem Omega, pay no attention to him.

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