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Smile(COMMENT!!)
written by speiamcial05:46 PM 2/6/05I'm sick of it
It seams like the whole world is against me
I'm fighting millions on my own
Everyday I put on a smile
And pretend to be happy
Hoping I won't be asked whats wrong
If only they knew
Maybe they'd understand
But they don't and its to late to explain
Few know how I really feal
But I dont think even they understand
After all it's just another day
I've made it this far and I'm not giving up now
This is a speed bump in the road of life
And I have to move on |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Marigold (2-6-2005 - 06:37 PM)
by minideathchild69 (2-8-2005 - 03:24 AM)
| a little depressing but really good |
by mishy0077 (2-8-2005 - 08:33 AM)
| omg, thats how i am, i am depressed, but hide behind a smile. only my boyfriend knows that i am depressed |
by (guest) (2-10-2005 - 09:27 PM)
| OMG that is such a good poem i know exactly how you feel. dnt u wish sum1 would just know how u really feel sumtimes? |
by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 06:58 AM)
| i love it! i understand. only peepl that have felt that way bfore can understand, so ur not alone |
by StrangeKara (2-25-2005 - 12:42 AM)
| For some reason, my friends can tell a difference between my smiles so they know when I am faking. Anyways...Really good poem. |
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