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umm no name??
written by harajukugrl06:46 PM 2/6/05I keep my eyes shut for fear of what I shall see,
I can sense the spirits around me, dancing about my room.
They prance and dance beside my bed,
Screeching and howling frightful songs.
I can sense the spirits around me, dancing about my room,
I feel a slight breeze as they float past my head.
Screeching and howling frightful songs,
Hooting and whistling, they talk amongst themselves.
I feel a slight breeze as they float past my head,
Their hands reach out to take me away.
Hooting and whistling, they talk amongst themselves,
They pick up my limp body and drag me away.
Their hands reach out to take me away,
They prance and dance beside my bed.
They pick up my limp body and drag me away.
I keep my eyes shut for fear of what I shall see. |
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umm yeah based on exagerated experience
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Spat_On (2-6-2005 - 06:49 PM)
| Evry1 exagerates, so what! I insist on it! Good poem! |
by skulls (2-28-2005 - 07:23 AM)
| wooooooooooooooooooooooooooo |
by AthiestAnarchist (3-2-2005 - 10:22 PM)
by AthiestAnarchist (3-2-2005 - 10:23 PM)
| sorry I fucked that one up..lol...I loved this poem...It was so awesome...keep writing. |
by Black_Ivy (4-9-2005 - 02:02 AM)
| Do you realize that you are the first and, to date, the only Hexxer to actually post a Pantoum poem in the Pantoum section; you are a god amongst Hexxers. Great poem it has a very Pagan/ mystical feel. Hell yeah, great work! |
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