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Hating to Love You...
written by -.SilentTears.-03:50 AM 2/7/05I hate the way you make me feel like I'm
nothing. I hate the way I love you more
than anything but you don't have enough time
to hear me. Left to cry where is a locked door.
I know I should hate you for all that you
have done, but I can't. You made me feel like
I meant something but now I don't know who
I am. You shall be breathless when the clock strikes.
Die. It is what I want most, you wouldn't care.
You will sit, laugh, and say I'm dumb well so
are you. You won't stop me from this I dare
you to. I asked you if you cared you said NO!
Well guess what I still love you more than EVER
I asked to be together you said NEVER! |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
ok, i wrote this for a school assignment, and i know its not very good but its true. its about my ex an how i still love him more than anything, but he doesnt care what my feelings are, or that i even have feelings
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-7-2005 - 08:15 AM)
| Congratulations--you are, so far, the only person to post something on this site who's put his/her poem in the correct place. Pretty good sonnet. And your ex sounds like a shithead. You're better off without the douchebag. |
by -.SilentTears.- (2-7-2005 - 11:12 PM)
| Thanks, he is fucking stupid and needs to get his shit straight, just the other day he told me that he wanted to stay single cuz he always gets fucked over and now he has girlfriend.... |
by (guest) (2-10-2005 - 12:59 PM)
| i say get a paper, write his name on it, and rip it into a million peices!!! ooh, so much fun!!!
by the way, AVENGED SEVENFOLD is the best band EVER!!!! |
by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 08:25 AM)
| (I'm the first person who commented.) You're welcome--he's clearly an asshole who has no idea what he wants. Who has time for that? It'll only be a matter of time til the new girl dumps his sorry ass. When she does, laugh at him. |
by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 08:26 AM)
| (I'm the first person who commented.) You're welcome--he's clearly an asshole who has no idea what he wants. Who has time for that? It'll only be a matter of time til the new girl dumps his sorry ass. When she does, laugh at him. |
by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 06:38 PM)
| this is a great poem..your ex is shit..there is definatly someone better 4 you that will care about your feelings!!so just remember that hes going to hell!!and laugh when he does! |
by -.SilentTears.- (2-12-2005 - 06:55 PM)
| Wow..Thanks for those posts, they make me feel alot better. |
by (guest) (2-13-2005 - 05:06 AM)
| the same thing happened to me, and i hate him for it. he told me that he didnt have time for a gf and now he has one and now he ignors me wen were suppost to still be friends and he "loves her" yea rite just tell him to fuck off if he ever talks to u again, cuz in the long run hell figure out ur so much better than him...good poem i feel the same way |
by AthiestAnarchist (2-27-2005 - 01:34 PM)
| I loved this poem...it reminds me of something that happened to me. Believe me...you are better off without people who don't care about you. |
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