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undying love
written by XsouredXfaithX
06:16 AM 2/7/05
off to the side she stands
watching them walk off hand in hand
her heart beats faster just from seeing him
but she hates seeing the 2 of them
and what made it worse was that was her best friend
and her jealousy made her wish she was dead
the twisting hatred had made her blind
and had messed up her emotions on the inside
all she would ever want her friend had
god how she wanted him so bad
she was thinking of a plan to get rid of her
so that she and he could be together forever
so no one to get in the way
she decided to kill her the next day
he dropped her off and kissed her good night
and whispered i love you as she looked at him with delight
this only made her want her gone more
that is what she had always longed for
the boy turned and left her at her door
not knowing he was leaving her forevermore
as soon as he was out of site
the girl stood up and stabbed her with a knife
as she lay there dying she looked up to see
that the girl killing her was me
i saw her breathe her last few breaths
then i turned and i left
now he is all mine
i am the one who makes his eyes shine
oh what a small price to pay
to make him mine in every way


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by (guest) (2-15-2005 - 12:09 AM)
damn thats a godd poem!!!you are a incredible writer.i can relate ..i like a guy named evan as you may know and he always talks to me about his g/f and how sweet she is and how he will never leave her and it just makes me want to kill someone!..but anyways awsome poem

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