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Feeding a Lie (comments please)
written by Blackhawk09:36 PM 2/8/05I see your face in the crowd.
So desperately I want to cry aloud.
Your hair of silk, so raven black.
It flows so freely down your back.
You glide on air like the angel you are.
Your beauty stands wide and far.
Your skin so soft in the easy air.
The deeds I've done I can't stand to bare.
Your graceful steps like fates entrails.
You walk on by as my heart kicks and flails.
Your ethereal beauty burns me blind.
The right thoughts I can't seem to find.
Thoughts of you invade my head.
How I wish those feelings were dead.
On the inside I commence to cry.
Why must I live this mournful lie?
Why must I weep and search and grope?
Why must I pretend there is hope?
There is none.
No love in light.
I long to speak one song to you.
I love you, yes I do. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Bleeding_suburbia (2-9-2005 - 03:40 PM)
| theres not really a comment that describes how you can epress yourself it seems like you reslly like some girl with silky black hair maybe your poetry will take you somewhere just keep on writing it like you mean it |
by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 05:09 AM)
| keep going for it because quiters never get what they whant |
by SatansMistress666 (3-11-2005 - 11:19 PM)
| "I will not stir the slumber of feelings that have died. If i never loved, than i never would have cried"
Guess who? |
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