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End
written by lost_cause
09:40 PM 2/8/05
I don't understand how it could happen this way...
We both hated her so much just the other day...
After everything that she put us through,
Your still willing to risk everything we do?
You throwing me out to be friends with her...
That's how it is and why I'm not sure...
Suddenly it's "Forget about Amber!"
That's what your thinking when your with her...
Your telling me lies of how we're still best friends
But I know very well that soon that will end...
You tell me I'm making it more than it is...
But you don't understand the way I see it...
I have three choices that I really don't like...
I could wait and lose you, I could pick up the knife...
Or instead of feeling all of that pain
I should just let out the physical strain...
So I'll give you up, now you're her best friend...
No matter my choice, our friendship would end...


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Comments?... long story... If you don't understand and would like to then U2U me and I will tell you the story...

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by bleedblack (2-9-2005 - 11:31 PM)
fuck you ... obviously you don't want to be my best friend anymore because your saying shit that isn't true ... your bringing so much drama to this ... you have no idea ... your still my best friend .. you know i love you to death but your taking this REALLY far ... and thats not how it is ... i'm giving cindy a second chance .. she's NOT my best friend ... so i don't know why your making it out to be that way ... you don't have to be friends with her but i decided i wanted to give her a chance ... so seriously ... quit saying that me and her are best friends because we're not .. and obviously you don't want to be mine any more ... damnit ... why the fuck are you taking this so far? you need help ... i think i need to be the one to get it for you too

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