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Painful (leave a comment plz)
written by blackrose_bleedred01:38 AM 2/9/05Hiding form this painful death
Living out my life in chains
What happens next
I wounder what life would be
If only I could see
But I dont know what to do
I cant explain why
I wish i would just die
I wish i could be truely be free |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by metalicTaurus (2-9-2005 - 01:42 AM)
| I kno how you feel luv your poem! |
by Lamiai (2-9-2005 - 01:57 AM)
| i love your poem... i can totally relate... great work |
by eyecatcher (2-12-2005 - 11:10 AM)
| good poem..i know exactly how it feels. |
by angelwhorns (2-13-2005 - 08:57 PM)
| its just to bad many have tryed to bee set free but yet there always posesed |
by sevenist_wanderer (3-22-2005 - 05:03 AM)
| Death is a gateway to the other side, but sadly, not the best way out. Death could solve a lot of my problems too, but it's for those I live for that I live. live for us. |
by People_scare_me (3-22-2005 - 12:54 PM)
| luv ur poem.... i know how feel.....i sometimes feel the same... |
by NIRVANAGRL1994 (3-23-2005 - 02:11 AM)
| I KNOW HOW U FEEL I TRIED SUICIDE ONCE ITS TO SCARY AND I DNT KNOW HOW PPL CAN DO IT |
by Misstress_Avelina (4-1-2005 - 08:56 PM)
| Suicide is always a choice but it's never the best way out. |
by (guest) (4-8-2005 - 09:33 AM)
| suicide is a permanent answer for a tempory problem, dont do it! i have wanbted to befor but think about the ppl u leave behind! ( cool poem btw!) |
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