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Dearest Sabrina (comments please)
written by Blackhawk
02:40 AM 2/9/05
Dearest Sabrina,
I am leaving this wretched place to escape the merciless woes of the world. Tragically I must leave you behind as well. The only reason left for my pitiful and horrific existence to continue. I leave you so that you may find peace and enlightenment.
I vow on what may be left of my rotten and decaying soul that the mere sweet aroma of your bosom will survive my morbid and desolate wasteland of my mind. The raven black flash of the waterfall of vivid and vivacious silk that is your hair will endure the journey ahead. The feeling of your lips on mine and dipping into an ethereal world of love in its purest form will steadfast with me. The sound of your harmonious and inviting voice will ring in my ears for all time. You fill my senses.
I only hope you never forget the shape who taught you the meaning of love and infactuation. You are safe in knowing that I will never forget my precious dark godess who showed me the wonders of all the love she has to offer.
Only remember me and do not mourn for me. One day perhaps we will meet again. To share a stormy and passionate kiss as if eternity weren't long enough for us. Remember me and all the joy we gave one another before I was forced to part ways with you, my beloved. I part ways with thee for now, my Princess of Everlasting Darkness.
Signed a most broken hearted,
Blackhawk


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Dearest Sabrina, a geniuine love story (Refer to "Feeding a Lie.")

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» Comments / Feedback
by loner_girl (2-9-2005 - 03:16 AM)
that was beautiful. I almost cried. Your one hell of a writer.

by little_red_raindrops (2-9-2005 - 03:44 AM)
wow, the only really good poem iv read all day, great job, almost make moi cry lol.

by Bleeding_suburbia (2-9-2005 - 03:36 PM)
wow compared to what everybody elses poem are yours is the dracula to the little dracula minions

by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 11:04 PM)
I really enjoyed the poem that you wrote. it was really enjoying. this is one of the best paoems ever .

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