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» Poem: On the Inside
On the Inside
written by XsouredXfaithX
05:29 AM 2/9/05
they are lingering inside you every day
ripping you apart in every way
that evil voice in the back of your mind
saying ' this is your time to die'
you try to ignore it but it is always there
you can try to get rid of it if you dare
but it wont ever work
it smiles at you with an invisible smirk
not just that, other things to
telling you things you know you shouldnt do
but you give way and do as they say
what will happen if you dont is what makes you afraid
how the anger and sadness will eat away at your soul
until you cant take it no more
demonic minions have corrupted your heart
they are silently ripping you apart
you dont even realise this is going on in you
you wont know till they are through
but then it will be to late
you will be corrupted with hate
and those voices slowly become your voice
your actions are now their choice
it is to late to do anything about it
you have dug your own pit


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by yeLLoFsiLenCe (2-10-2005 - 08:04 AM)
you're very good at writting poems I can relate I know how it feels great job and wording

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