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The questionable answers
written by wiltedrose01:38 AM 2/10/05If theres no one in this world
Who can make me smile
Then why take a photo?
If I love someone with all my heart
And they don'tlove me back
Why love them at all?
If I crush hope in my hand
Like it was nothing at all
Was it really anything to begin with?
If I do everything in my power to make you proud
But you don't acknowlege anything
Why try to impress?
If I take a dagger to my heart
And die right here and now
Was I ever reall there at all?
Would you even care?
No, because you don't even know I exist
and never will |
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Free Verse? wow ok thats new...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xwhatitis2burn8x (2-10-2005 - 04:24 AM)
| great poem, my only critque would be is i dont like the ending. its not thats its bad as much as i personally just dont think it fits. but other than that great work. everything up to would you even care was extremely moving and easy to relate to and understand. :-) keep up the good work |
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