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» Poem: why did you do it?
why did you do it?
written by XsouredXfaithX
06:13 AM 2/10/05
you turned your back on me
betrayel for the world to see
now i have to suffer because of you
hell is what your puttin me through
it was going good with my parents not knowing
now there words of scorn are forever in my mind flowing
you had to pull up my sleeve with them right there
to show them without thinking if i would care
they saw the lines up and down
and there smiles quickly became frowns
now i cant do anything that could leave even a small cut
like it matters, my arm is already a jagged rut
i dont understand why you had to tell?
to make my life a living hell?
they dont understand why i slit to make the pain subside
it is what kept me from suicide
but because of you they will never understand
why i have these cuts on my wrist and hands
now for the rest of my life these scars they will know
these cuts represent the pain i never did show.


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comment...especially if you can relate that and i would love to know what you think and please check my other poems and comment on your favorites...

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» Comments / Feedback
by yeLLoFsiLenCe (2-10-2005 - 07:51 AM)
I can relate, good poem

by Danny43090 (2-11-2005 - 02:16 AM)
i also like it, shows the dark side of betrayal

by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 07:51 AM)
Yea i understand...I have been doin it for 2 years...and my friend told on me. Now my parents and everyone at my church all know. I hate when they ask me..."why would u want to die?'" Awesome poem-Cass aka cut_wrist_risk

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