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Subdomania; Next to something real
written by cryptic_misery04:38 PM 2/10/05Lying in this stubborn subdomain of a home
The passion
The feeling of being forgotten
Left behind to rot.
An incision
A scar of hate;
The next sign of hope
For a living, a beginning
To something real
Something strong.... like paranoia
A place in the sky
For an everlasting desire
To walk beside myself,
To walk beside you,
In death
In a dream; free
As I wish
Sadly,
Lost in this subdomania
I can't get the best
I'm always second place
Running away from everything
Hiding, clammed up in the corner
While I lay next to this black hole
Next to nothing
Next to something real |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
The subdomania is something that came from my mind, it's something that is good, but still not the best. and never will be the best. Just like a subdomain website, it's good, but not the best. no matter what, somebody always wants something better then what they have...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by I_heart_jack_black (2-10-2005 - 05:36 PM)
| EXACTLY! that's what I've always thought! A wife who lives with her "soul-mate" husband dreams of moving to hawaii w/ Brad Pitt cus her husband is that thing that you made up! I was just thinking about this the other day.. it makes perfect sense! purty poem too! I had to read it twice to comprehend it cus it's so clever! (don't worry, dats not a bad thing.. lol.) I'm just sToOpid.. :P |
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