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Fuck it
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns10:30 PM 2/10/05'll never be accepted." ans she sighed as she threw her mothers necklace to the ground. The necklace that used to mean so much to her. The necklace her mother gave her before she died. It meant nothing now. It all meant nothing. The world, hope, her.
She choked back tears as she looked down at the rocky ground, wishing she would just fade away. It's not like anyone would care or even notice. Her step mother, sister. They hated her - atleast that's what she thought. She had no friends. They thought she was a freak, a weirdo. She wanted to dissapear. Become a shadow.
she looked out in the distance at the cars wizzing by. She wiped away the tears that had escaped from her eyes. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by xwhatitis2burn8x (2-10-2005 - 10:38 PM)
i like it, it tells a nice short story and i love the ending. thats always the hardest part for me lol. kinda short but damn good. congrats on a job well done |
by (guest) (2-10-2005 - 10:40 PM)
this story is really good, i like it a lot :) it's veryyy nice :)
keep up the good work! |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-10-2005 - 10:45 PM)
thanks to the both of you its always good to hear what other people think so thank you |
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