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» Poem: 10 things I hate about you
10 things I hate about you
written by cryinginside
10:45 PM 2/10/05
I hate hearing your name
I hate you cause me pain
I hate that your so nice
I hate to know you can always give me advice
I hate to see you smile
I hate your unique style
I hate to see you cry
I hate that I cant stop thinking of you even when I try
I hate that life near you is never a bore
But most of all I hate that these are the things I live for


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» Comments / Feedback
by fallen_&_lost_angel (2-10-2005 - 10:49 PM)
good job

by Panic (2-10-2005 - 10:54 PM)
Simple and different. To the point and not full of meaningless babble. Good job!

by Stained_With_Life (3-22-2005 - 05:05 AM)
It's so confusing, but good, I think I get what ya mean

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