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» Poem: mirror, mirror
mirror, mirror
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
11:22 PM 2/10/05
take a look into the mirror and tell me what you see.
I see a girl who looks somewhat like me.
I see, Anger writen all over her face.
I see hate burning in her eyes.
Filled with pain bursting deep inside.
She feels btrayed by her own lies.
For only now she will realize, the pain will only rize and rize.
And with that pain a monster will awake deep inside.
And destroy anyone in her path.

Take a look into the mirror and tell me what you see.
I see a ugly but true refection of me.
I see a girl crying helplessly.
A girl who knows her sins, and knows whatz needed to be done.
She wants to be alone, so she right her wrongs.
And turn away from the devils eyes.


Take a look into the mirror and tell me what you see.
I see only one of many true relections of me.
I see a girl staring back at me,
with a face that simply says,
"Help me."


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» Comments / Feedback
by yesterdaysfeelings (2-10-2005 - 11:31 PM)
I love it!!!it sounds just like me!!!!great job your relating to someone.......

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-10-2005 - 11:51 PM)
Thanks so much and ya it is good

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