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Can you Relate?
written by XsouredXfaithX02:10 AM 2/11/05everyday she sits in her room alone
once again her mom is not home
probably out getting drunk somewhere
thinking Sarah doesnt care
when she is home she gets drunk again
screaming at Sarah, tearing her from within
she goes and locks herself in her room to escape
thinking about the cuts shell soon make
she gets out her razor under her bean bag
and pulls up her sleeve and grabs a rag
slowly the blood starts to flow
the pain is letting go
because of this she wears long sleeves
so the world will never know the pain she receives
theyd never imagina such a sweet little girl
cutting and making herself hurl
but the world only sees a lie
this sweet little girl wishes to die
until that day shell try and get by
one cut at a time |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is about my best friend and i know i can relate cuz me and her have the same way so comment please
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Danny43090 (2-11-2005 - 02:14 AM)
| damn....very deep poem, loved it....your poetry is very deep and thats why i always enjoy it
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by EliminezFille (2-11-2005 - 05:04 AM)
| i can realate, i cut myself then hide it so the world won't see, Shit u write good stuff, Rad!
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by yeLLoFsiLenCe (2-11-2005 - 05:54 AM)
| damn you're a really good writter and I can relate to it, keep writting I like reading them. |
by minideathchild69 (2-11-2005 - 06:12 AM)
| dude!!!!! you're good. and i know what it's like to live like that. but damn!!!!! |
by Trapezium (2-13-2005 - 07:54 PM)
| I can relate, except my mother doesn't get drunk, she's abusive 24/7. I've quit cutting, too. I've still got some pencil sharpener blades, though. (Razorblades have been hidden grr) |
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