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Stand alone
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns05:07 AM 2/11/05Colors turn to black and white
Pleasure turns to pain
A smile turns into tears
And here I stand alone
A day with a person you thought you could trust
Turned to blood and tears
Belief then turns to grief
And I still stand alone
A day with my family
Turns to angry yelling
My day with the boyfriend, just turned into painful bruises
And once again I stand alone
My clean undamaged skin
Turns to cuts and blood
A first day somewhere new, faults in getting lost
And in the end I stand alone |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (2-11-2005 - 05:22 AM)
oooo very good. i like the repetitive "i stand alone" reminds me of a really really good godsmack song. great job |
by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-13-2005 - 02:11 AM)
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