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Death isnt always so bad
written by XsouredXfaithX06:35 AM 2/11/05i walk this earth barely alive
forever dead on the inside
feelings torn and ripped to shreds
you dont have emotions when your dead
until i die i just try to get by
taking it one cut at a time
making people think that im so happy when im not
im not what people once thought
ive learned the pain this world can bring
it seemed to all start to happen to me
and at such a young age it started to occur
so much has happened it is all just a blur
the pain runs together making it impossible to bear
but now it is so much i have lost all care
if i stopped to think about it all i wouldnt be here right now
id be 6 feet underground
not naturally of course
from screaming till my voice was hoarse
and slitting my wrist to much on the vein
just to try and get rid of one ounce of pain
i guess its good i have become numb on the inside
cuz if not id be dead from suicide |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 06:42 AM)
| love it thought it was great and intense |
by 1x2x4xGET (2-11-2005 - 07:09 AM)
| Im sorry that you hurt...but you are living proof that from pain stems beauty...as cheesy as it sounds...let words seep from your heart, instead of blood from your wrists |
by HdHype (2-11-2005 - 07:14 AM)
| it probably was a good peom. but its just not the kind that i like. |
by (guest) (2-11-2005 - 07:25 AM)
| I loved this poem so powerful and so meaningful. Please check out my poems my name on her is cut_wrist_risk im on a different computer now so yea well hope to hear from u soon. nice job.-Cassy |
by yeLLoFsiLenCe (2-11-2005 - 08:02 AM)
| Again damn good poem.I can really relate to what you write. |
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