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» Poem: love (yeah comment please)
love (yeah comment please)
written by trina
07:36 PM 2/11/05
u the feeling of ur blood turning cold
like u cant speak or
dont know what to say
the feeling that makes ur heart skips beat
u do crazy things for that person
u get all sweaty ur hands shake
u start to studder
feeling that can never get u down
it could be gas NAW
love my be love my not be
who really knows


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thank u NOT

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» Comments / Feedback
by I_heart_jack_black (2-11-2005 - 10:24 PM)
I know the feeling........ of ppl NOT COMMENTING! lol... no, seriously, it was a good poem, and don't fret, cuz no one ever comments for my poems either!=)

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