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The Note{read the girl 1st on profile}
written by XsouredXfaithX12:06 AM 2/12/05I have decided to leave this world of pain
since i could never get the happiness i wished to gain
im tired of all the beating,rumors, and hatred
of no one having good human nature
im sick of the agony burning inside me
but the world being to blind to see
the scars on my arm can show you how bad it was
dont you dare think i cut just because
there is a reason, a purpose, a story behind every swipe
that led to me taking my own life
every person i know contributed to one or more
and is a reason for the blood stains on my floor
you have no idea how long i have prayed to die
or how many nights i would stay awake and cry
how many days i would scream till my voice was gone
and for attention, do things i know was wrong
i eventually grew sick of this over time
the cuts were no longer enough to get by
thats why i decided to give myself the thing i prayed for each day
to be rid of this world, to permanetly break away
now it is to late, the deed is done
down my arm the blood has begun to run
so i bid you world my final farewell
ill see you all in hell |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 12:14 AM)
| dude that was sweet man...i know how u feel biotch...loved the ending when u said see u all in hell XD |
by AJ (2-12-2005 - 04:23 AM)
| willllll thats was intursting!!!! great job!!! himmm this is a chalangr can u do a peom thats is not dark??? thats my challange for u to do
peace up aj down lol!!!! |
by ekibyo_drakmord (3-2-2005 - 12:06 AM)
| dont listen to AJ not trying to bug on you Aj but if you want to try something not dark you can but, its your style, and i love the way you blend words, and i know people that are good with dark poems and not with lighter poems, i love the darkness, and detail in all your poems |
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