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I Love him
written by loner_girl06:01 AM 2/12/05I hold him in my gaze
As he holds me in his arms
I feel no pain
I know no harms
I'm warm, and i'm safe
I'm not cold anymore
Ever since he picked me up
Off the dirty floor
When he smiles at me
I fall in love once more
I love him
He's the only one i adore |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Blackhawk (2-13-2005 - 02:20 AM)
Very captivating and luscious. This is the sort of thing you can accomplish when you set your mind to it. Keep up your writing. Indeed it was short but sweet and you have my praise. |
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