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How Much More?(plz comment)
written by dark_child0705:44 PM 2/12/05People make me feel so stupid,
Like I dont know anything,
I just want to crawl back into not caring at all,
or better yet, just stop living.
People say I am pretty,
Or that I am as smart as anyone else,
but they are all a bunch of liars,
they dont care about me, only themselves.
I feel so alone in this world,
trying to live a life chosen for me,
Because I continually get let down,
by the people who supposedly care about me.
They say they love me,
they say they care,
but sooner or later, just like everyone else,
I will look up and they wont be there.
I feel so alone,
living in this creul world with a life I hate,
before I make that final leap that takes me away,
how much more do you think I can take? |
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This is for anyone who has ever been let down by the people they care about the most!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by scribble_girl (2-12-2005 - 06:43 PM)
| I know exactly where u are with this . . . . its really good! :)
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by MaterLuna-26 (2-12-2005 - 08:12 PM)
| you never going to be let down by me i'll always be there when you look up , and you know that. i when you wanna take the leap i'll be there with you. love ya lilcorky |
by lost_soul67 (2-12-2005 - 08:18 PM)
| hehehehehehehehehe u pansey but u go i go bremember that terry
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