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» Poem: Last Chance(plz comment)
Last Chance(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
06:05 PM 2/12/05
You broke my heart,
But I never stopped loving you,
please dont let me regret,
giving another chance to you.
Please dont hurt me,
the way you did before,
I tried to stay away from you,
but I couldnt take it anymore.
The day I let you go,
my whole world fell apart,
Cuz no matter where I was or what I did,
You never truly left my heart.
I am giving you another chance,
to prove you care about me,
but this time,
dont cheat on me!
Please dont hurt me,
this is your last chance,
I love you with all of my heart,
but this is MY last chance for total happiness.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Cory, this one is for you....You broke my heart once before...dont do it again.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 06:17 PM)
I truly enjoyed this poem it relats so much to my life...i gave my ex- boyfriend a second chance even thought i fear it may happen again but i love him and we are try to build the trust again

by (guest) (2-12-2005 - 06:53 PM)
u really like this poem this is like my life but u know guys are really nothing they just like 2 mess around with a girls heart!!

by lost_soul67 (2-12-2005 - 08:14 PM)
court i don't like ur poem no jklol u pansey love ya terry

by MaterLuna-26 (2-12-2005 - 08:24 PM)
hey chica don't worrie if he hurts you i'll hurt him, this is a really great poem

by LostInDarkness (2-12-2005 - 10:36 PM)
I can totally relate.. my boyfriend has cheated on me twice but I couldn't bring myself to break up with him, but I told him he has one more chance.. another time and hes gone forever.

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