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fly on the wall
written by teejavus06:59 PM 2/12/05I saw a fly on the wall
Wondered why it didnt fall
Was it just luck
Or were its feet stuck
Or may be gravity missed things so small |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by deathdestruction_bleed (2-19-2005 - 09:53 AM)
| this is seriously brilliant i wish i had thought of the last line you make me jealous |
by teejavus (2-19-2005 - 04:57 PM)
by PaIN_oF_paYMeNt (2-20-2005 - 05:14 PM)
| i like that you can make an awesome poem out of something so incignificant that we never really think of |
by (guest) (2-21-2005 - 05:43 PM)
by whatShouldUsBe (3-2-2005 - 05:37 AM)
| This was pretty good . . . what exactly is a limerick???u2u me please! |
by freakroses (3-16-2005 - 04:41 PM)
by Tigress92 (3-20-2005 - 10:31 PM)
by naughtylilpixie (4-13-2005 - 05:42 PM)
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