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Landscape of a mind*#
written by Trapezium12:42 PM 7/13/04Through the trees and bushes,
I see a vast landscape,
Many a dull plains,
Plain,
That's all they are,
Empty inside,
A blade of grass here and there,
Cover the dark of the mud,
And the murkiness around,
The trees and bushes are beatiful,
But they've withered away,
Dead,
Nearly rotting,
The grass has yellowed,
Turning to brown,
The leaves have blown away,
Leaving darkness in there wake,
The mud is even darker,
Soon it fades,
Disappears completely,
It is gone forever,
This beautiful dullness,
Is the space you call mine,
The space of my mind,
These objects that have flown away,
They are my soul. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
wow... my poems are getting worse... No Liam it's not stolen... all of my poetry is my own...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by vampire_princess (7-14-2004 - 06:14 PM)
| woah!! thats some pretty deep stuff but i like it......and umm...maybe i'm crazy but is liam like your split personalty or somthing? i don't know anyway thats all i gotta say |
by psycho_bunny (7-14-2004 - 06:36 PM)
| that was... simply amazeing... this is the first of your poems I have read but if they are all as good as this one I have to say you are an amazeing... no your a fantastic writer!!
the feeling that went in to that was awesome... the sheer feeling, it deserves three thumbs up but sense I only have two that will have to do lol. |
by Trapezium (7-15-2004 - 11:41 AM)
| Liam's a freind but on his forums i posted it first and he said it was stolen... I honestly don't think this is a good poem but it is quite deep |
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