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Moon(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
04:18 PM 2/13/05
I would give anything,
to get back to you,
I need you there to comfort me,
like you used to.

I wish I didn't have to leave,
I hate that I had to go away,
I miss being able to,
see you every single day.

You are my best friends.
I hate that you cant be here,
When everything was screwed up and out of perspective,
you opened my eyes and made everything clear.

I miss you so much,
I hope to see you soon,
Just think! When you look up on the sky one lonely night,
we'll be looking at the same moon cuz I will be lonely too.


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For: Danni, Terry, Travis, and Cory......PR21 444....

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» Comments / Feedback
by painfull-secrets (2-13-2005 - 04:24 PM)
waw.. this is really nice!

by Sik_demon_chik (2-13-2005 - 04:26 PM)
Sounds sad. It was good.

by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 07:36 PM)
everyone is under the same moon...just to be sure spend your lonely nights out there being comforted that they might be doing the same good poem

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