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What do You See? (plz comment)
written by dark_child0704:35 PM 2/13/05I am lways looking for u,
in the placed you should be,
but you are nowhere to be found,
it seems like you r avoiding me.
It gets me wondering if you,
really care about me,
when you look at me,
what do u see?
Do you see how much I love you?
or how easily I can be replaced?
what do you see,
when u look at my face?
When u look in my eyes,
do u see stars?
When u look at me,
r u able to look past the emotional scars?
Do u see a past full of pain,
3hen u look at me?
Or a lifetime to come,
Just tell me, what do u see? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Sik_demon_chik (2-13-2005 - 04:49 PM)
| Kick ass...I sort of know how you feel, I liked it. :) |
by black_wolf (2-13-2005 - 07:03 PM)
| It's good. And understandable. |
by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 07:32 PM)
| is this about your dad or your parents again? |
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