ZENHEX.COM



Not logged in [Login - Register]
Go To Bottom


» Poem: You Say(p;z comment)
You Say(p;z comment)
written by dark_child07
05:09 PM 2/13/05
You say you love me,
you say you care,
So why cant u accept me the way I am?
Its just not fair!
You say you will be there,
for always and eternity,
but you cant stand the life I live,
unless it is the life you chose 4 me.
You say you will love me,
until the end of time,
but you cant run my life anymore,
it isnt your life...its mine.
I will make mistakes and do things,
u really wish I wouldn't do,
But I am asking you to accept me and the things you dont like,
just like I did 4 u.
You see Daddy,
You say u will love me unconditionally,
but yet for some reason,
You cant accept our differences.....I am not u...i am just me!


All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.

Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for my father.....I wish u could accept me the way u accept Ryan and Hannah

[ View dark_child07's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]

This Poem has been viewed 98 times


» Comments / Feedback
by black_wolf (2-13-2005 - 07:10 PM)
I feel for you.

by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 07:30 PM)
completely relate...i just decided to break away from my mom and dad who were doing the same things..i didnt care about the tears and if you do the same i dont think you will either...yes it has its down sides but living a life like that sucks ass majorly..it dominated my life and i dont want to have to sit here knowing its dominating someone elses..IM me at country4clover

» Poetry Menu


»All Types
»Allegory
»Ballad
»Ballade
»Black Verse
»Canzone
»Cinquain
»Couplets
»Diamante
»Dramtic Monologue
»Dramatic Dialogue
»Eclogue
»Elegy
»Epic
»Free Verse
»Haiku
»Hymn
»Limerick
»Lyric
»Narrative
»Ode
»Pantoum
»Pastoral
»Rondeau
»Rondelets
»Roundel
»Satire
»Sestina
»Sonnet
»Tanka
»Triolet
»Villanelle


The system has failed to process your request. If you're an administrator, please set the DEBUG flag to true in config.php.