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You (ana)
written by Trapezium06:53 PM 2/13/05You hold me in your sinister arms,Your sneers could be my lullaby,
I'd have to be a conscious calculator,To count the many times you've made me cry.
You grasp my body when I fall,Then you throw me further down.
You teach me mental arithmetic,And when I'm wrong - a part of me drowns.
You accentuate your adjectives,When you describe my tum and thighs,
You scream when I eat too much,And when I do too little excercise.
Your eyes forever haunt me,Always watching my weight,
You attempt to make me perfect,By purging what's on my dinner plate. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 07:20 PM)
| its good to know people are going through the same thing..thanks for writing sych an awesome poem about it...i wrote one baout mia called down they go and im glad u took the time to write about the other disorder...awesome job! |
by piperneedshelp (2-13-2005 - 07:44 PM)
| thats really good. kinda makes u wonder what makes us care what ana thinks. but then i just had a thought....we dont care about ana, we care about the other people....and we just give them a form and a name |
by Meaningless (2-13-2005 - 08:43 PM)
| I really like it, I'm ana myself, I've never looked at her (ana) as being so cruel though, she kind of...i don't know nevermind, I really liked your poem though. Love love
nicole |
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