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Whats really there
written by XxXkissmeHarDXxX08:24 PM 2/13/05She sits at her desk
Alone and away
It doesn't look like she cried today
but you can only see,
what doesn't appear to be.
For if you looked closer
Looked deep down inside
You'd start to relaize
the part that does cry
Shte doesn't have to have tears
For what she's kept in for so many years.
No one would be suspicious
Of a little bruise or scar
But there is more to it
You'd be off by far
To think she was perfectly normal
Good natured and formal.
But deep down
Deep on the inside
You'd see plenty of times
When this girl has cried
Times of abuse and anger
Plenty of things that would change her.
But even though
you couldn't see
That deep down
she wanted 2 flee.
She had done all the right math,
But just needed to choose the right path.
She screamed from the inside
But kept quite on the out,
She didn't want to show
what her life was about.
So she sat and stared
Instead of decideing to share.
So she sits at her desk
Alone and away
now as tears stream down
Her face today
But you choose not to see
What really did appear to be. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this poem, basically says, people can look like they are fine, but you never really know intill it really shows, and when their problems really show, you choose to ignore them...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Lippstikk (2-13-2005 - 08:30 PM)
| it's good n long.... i doubt that many people read the whole thing cause it's so long. |
by XsouredXfaithX (2-13-2005 - 08:30 PM)
| that poem basicallt describes me..out of the over a year that i have lived in memphis i have only been seen crying once...and that was b/c my uncle found out i cut..but yet so many days i cry on the inside...but i choose to hide it..i guess you could say it was the wasy i was raised...thank you for writing a damn good poem....not near as shitty as mine are lol |
by (guest) (2-13-2005 - 09:00 PM)
| Has feeling and describes so much what people choose, or choose not to do.. sad but true. Excellent. |
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