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Touch my Tears
written by boom_boom13
11:52 PM 2/13/05
Hugging a pillow, I try to get you out of my head.
But I start thinking of you instead.
Your soul and heart burns inside me,
And it makes me oblivious to the things I see.

I can feel you touch my tears while I sleep,
And I can feel you hug me as I weep.
Even though I miss you very much,
I can't stop thinking about your touch.

Late at night, when the moon shines bright,
I think of you and my life starts to light,
But when you touch my tears,
I start to feel everything I felt in the past few years.

And right now I'm hugging a pillow to get you out of my head,
But I keep writing and thinking about you instead.
And I can feel you touch my tears while I weep,
And I know that you put them in a glass bottle to keep.


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» Comments / Feedback
by trulybroken57 (2-13-2005 - 11:55 PM)
wow, that is so deep, and so good, it's like my new favorite poem, keep it up

by another_broken_soul (2-13-2005 - 11:57 PM)
that's really beautifully written. i love the line about when you sleep. it's very simple and really effective. gorgeous idea.

by Darkwolfgirl (2-14-2005 - 03:29 AM)
great poem. you are truely an artist. your creative style calls. great job.

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