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all you left were bloody scars
written by madolivamakoot01:58 PM 2/14/05another day of wanting you
but knowing any kind of love you have is untrue
take another slit to my wrist
it was the first time you had ever been kissed
fake id's sitting across the bar
you were the one who left a scar
onece knowing how you made me feel
i had to cut to see my pain was real
holding me close late at night
what we were doing wasnt right
i guess happyness only assists in dreams
casue your not half as good as you seamed |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
damn i think i need to get out of what they call the cutting stage
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| » Comments / Feedback | by depressedcutter14 (2-14-2005 - 10:24 PM)
| i like ur poem and what do u mean by cutting stage o and if u need to tlk to someone or just to reply my comment u2u me.
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by Air_of_the_night (2-15-2005 - 10:38 AM)
| I like this poem of yours. It's flows together so sweetly. That person who called you a poser by the way is fuckin dumb. No one has the right to call anyone else fake or a poser beacuse only you know the real you. And in the end the people who call others names are the real fakies. Keep writing. You have great talent. |
by madolivamakoot (2-17-2005 - 01:37 AM)
| thanks for the good fedback and about the whole cutting stage thing when i asked for help thats what i told it was that i had no problems that it was just a stage but ovesley not since it hasnt went away and ive been doing it for 2 years |
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