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» Poem: Please don't leave me behind (comments?)
Please don't leave me behind (comments?)
written by demented_vampire
03:36 PM 2/14/05
I knew you were the one for me.
I knew it was ment to be.
Did you really love me?
If you did, how come I couldnt see?

Maybe I was blinded by the lies,
you left behind for me to find.
Why is it left undefind?

I asked you if it was usless to eplain?
You said " I do love you and you know how I feel,
you feel it too. Dont leave me behind."

I told him I never would, untill he died.
But I still couldnt leave him behind.
I cried.
I didnt know how to take it.

I know I will see him again.
Just dont know when.

Please dont think i dont love you.
I do just come back and take me with you.

Should I commit suicide, just to be in your arms again?
What a wonderful sin.
A dream to soon become reality.

I stab myself and the pain goes away.
Now I can see you today.
I wait for you in a dark place.
I cant wait to see your face.

I see you and I start to cry.
No longer do I hurt inside.
We kissed and walked away together.
Our new life will last forever.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
please dont think i left you behind. i try so hard not to cry.

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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (2-15-2005 - 10:09 PM)
nice poem...kinda sad tho. I like it :)

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